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Honey And Salt

By David Perlmutter
Honey And Salt by David Perlmutter digital book - Fable

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The story is narrated by Olivia Thrift, a.k.a. the Manitoba based pre-teen super-heroine Captain Fantastic. After filling us in about her background, she then proceeds to speak about her first meeting with the members of the Canadian Consortium of Super-heroines, all of whom are her age or slightly older and based in different parts of Canada. She is particularly thrilled to meet her idol Gerda Munsinger, a.k.a. Muscle Girl, also a Manitoban by residence, and even more so when Gerda befriends her.

However, the joyousness of the occasion is marred when Captain Fantastic's arch-enemy Gridiron Girl arrives and tricks Captain Fantastic into literally fighting a losing battle with her. In doing so, Olivia loses the personal confidence required to sustain her heroic persona, and becomes meek and helpless, saved only from death by the timely intervention of Muscle Girl.

It is discovered that a villainous race of men known as the Merch are responsible for this, as well as the kidnapping of the members of the Consortium en masse when Gerda and Olivia are otherwise engaged. As a consequence, Muscle Girl is forced to call the aid of her colleagues in the International League of Girls with Guns- The Brat, an alien only resembling a toddler; Power Bunny, a truly animated rabbit; Cerberus, the all-mighty Princess of Puppies; and Candy Girl, the Titan of Teens- to help her and a temporarily powerless Olivia set things right.

Yet it will not be an easy task. And before it is over, they may all succumb to multiple kinds of weakness that will destroy them permanently....

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“I received a copy of this book from the publisher via Net-Galley in exchange for an honest review. It's not a good sign when you can't finish reading a *novella*. But I couldn't finish this one. The opening pages were just terrible. First-person narration is always hit-or-miss, and this was a very definite miss; I couldn't stand the main character's 'voice', and the writing is just. Kind of a trainwreck. In our opening, the main character is 'a little dizzy' from drinking ginger ale. I'd like to know how that's possible, since ginger ale is non-alcoholic in it's modern form. But maybe the alleged tipsiness is supposed to excuse sentences like this 'Actually, "it" was a "he", so I should call him that instead. I'm all about giving respect when it's deserved or earned.' What? I genuinely don't understand what's being said here. Is she claiming that using the correct pronoun is a sign of respect? It's basic courtesy, and it's definitely disrespectful to refuse to use a person's chosen pronouns, but this is being framed like calling him 'he' is similar to calling him 'sir', which is bizarre. 'He' is a ghost, who is in fact not a ghost, but 'a deity who resides in all through which information communication is transmitted.' On its own, this is an interesting concept, but...a god? An actual *god* has appeared in your living room, and it's only vaguely startling, and where did he come from? Are there other gods? What makes him a god? What does this mean for religion in the world of this novella? 'So again, like a goof, I asked him again: "You mean you're from the telephone company?' Okay, the character is 'tipsy' (somehow) and I guess people do and say ridiculous things when they're tipsy. But it's the repeated 'again' in that sentence that makes me twitch - it's something very basic that should have been edited out of the first draft. But that's kind of the problem; this novella reads like a first draft that *really* needs a few more rounds of edits. It's jerky, awkward, and random (not in a good way), and the writing itself is incredibly unpolished. An interesting premise can't save from terrible execution.”

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